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Looking for proofreaders

PostPosted: Fri Dec 26, 2008 4:59 am
by Agmar
The long-awaited second edition of Warriors, Wizards & Wanderers is nearly completed!

The system was redone from scratch and now only use d6 and I added some new material like a random dungeon generator, a sample adventure and rules for traps. Now it's truly a complete game in 8 pages :)

Anyway, since English is not my primary language, if someone can look at the file and point me any error of grammar or syntax, it will be greatly appreciated. Comments are also welcomed.

The file is temporarily located here:

And Merry Christmas everybody!

PostPosted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 4:08 am
by Rob Lang
Are you intending on making the game free? If so, I will proof read as well as review it on if you like!

PostPosted: Thu Jan 01, 2009 11:30 am
by Agmar
Indeed, it's intended to be a free game and you're welcome to review it.

Anyway, the file has been updated with minor rule changes and after some basic proofreading.

Happy new year everybody too :)

PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:59 am
by Rob Lang
Thanks Agmar, I'll add it to my list of things to review. :)

PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2009 7:55 pm
by tadk
Would you still like another set of eyes on your game?

PostPosted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:11 pm
by Chainsaw Aardvark
I'm a little busy at the moment, but have actual college course in technical editing behind me, and a degree in English. It may take a while, but I'll give it a look over.