There is one thing that should always be perfectly clear with just a glance at a character sheet: what game is it for?
Your character sheet is serviceable, Onix, but to me, it feels like it could fit with any system. For a character sheet, it lacks character. The easiest way to give it character is to add a system graphic somewhere. For example, add the D&D logo to a character sheet, and most people will be able to recognize it on sight as being for a D&D game (even if they don't take the time to read the logo itself). Personally, some of my favorite character sheets go far beyond that. I really like the one from "Keeton Must Die! Teddy Bear Blood Sport." It actually doesn't have many more specifics than yours does, but it has the lovely stitch quasi-venn diagram. I've never played the game, but I am fairly sure that if I saw the sheet by itself, I'd be able to identify the game it belongs to.
The Victorian era had distinct artistic styles: perhaps to add character to your character sheet, you should consider mimicking some of those elements in the character sheet.