Greetings, all. I've just submitted my first 24-hour RPG effort, an oldskool SF work called Haven. It can be found on the . I had a blast designing it, but being an insecure amateur game designer, I'm hungry for any and all comments, criticisms and, especially, improvement suggestions. I grossly misjudged the time I had and the game, as it stands, is far from finished. But I intend to change that. ^__^
I'm going to sit on my fingers here and stay quiet about all the things I've thought of that need adding or changing. I'd like to hear what other people think, first.
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Spacemouse