I've just read to the end of your PDF, and you are a very bad man - you know why!
Initial reaction is that it looks great, but would benefit greatly from examples of play. This helps a lot in translating the written rules into what Actual Play would look like, which is a huge bonus for anyone reviewing the game.
Yeah, I realized as I was drifting off to sleep last night that I still didn't have examples of play in there. It's a lack I intend to fix -- perhaps today, perhaps not.
And I have no idea what you're talking about, Doug! (-:O