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Second Draft: Our Steel, King's Law [was Steel on Steel]

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:48 am
by Joshua BishopRoby

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:50 am
by MikeSands
A draft already? Man, I was just feeling proud of finishing an outline...

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 2:51 am
by Joshua BishopRoby
See, and I was just remarking to myself, "Wait, it's one in the morning? Where did Saturday go?"

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 6:22 am
by Troy_Costisick

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 6:44 am
by Doug Ruff
Joshua,

I've just read to the end of your PDF, and you are a very bad man - you know why! :D

Initial reaction is that it looks great, but would benefit greatly from examples of play. This helps a lot in translating the written rules into what Actual Play would look like, which is a huge bonus for anyone reviewing the game.

Regards,

Doug

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:05 pm
by Joshua BishopRoby
Thanks, Troy and Doug!

Yeah, I realized as I was drifting off to sleep last night that I still didn't have examples of play in there. It's a lack I intend to fix -- perhaps today, perhaps not.

And I have no idea what you're talking about, Doug! (-:O

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:26 pm
by jwalton
It's like Rune + Dogs + Muskateers. Hot.

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:33 pm
by Joshua BishopRoby

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 3:55 pm
by Joshua BishopRoby

PostPosted: Sun Mar 12, 2006 4:02 pm
by spaceanddeath