1KM1KT Free RPG Community

I've completed a first draft of my game.




Some feedback would be really appreciated. Thanks in advance!

I'm working on some improvements to the text right now. Most of the rules are now solid and will not be changed except I get better ideas of handling some situations or detect loopholes. Or you people give me some really sweet feedback I need to incorporate.

No, I'm not here to bump my thread, really!

I have some questions:
-Is the text clear? Please tell me if you didn't get past the first couple of sentences. It's my fault and I need to corrigate it if that's the case. I've learned english only for one year and that was already ten years ago, might be that my language confuses some people.
-I feel like it's a bit too brief. Isn't it?
-Which parts need more explanation? I know there are some rules people won't understand at first sight. As a beginner in game design, I am not sure which ones these are.
-Which parts need an example? Might be that every part, please tell me if that's the case.
-Does the example character sheet help in understanding the game?