REVIEWER NAME: Dave Michael
1) CREATIVE AND EFFECTIVE INCORPORATION OF RULES (1-10): 9
Feedback:
All of the ingredients are well incorporated, but the time seems
like it might not be right.
2) CLARITY (1-10): 7
Feedback:
There are some typos and there are a few rules that are written in a
kind of jumbled way. The descriptions are great!
3) COMPLETENESS (1-10): 8
Feedback:
Just needs a few edits. Could be played as is, but is a little muddled.
4) ESTIMATED EFFECTIVENESS IN PLAY (1-10): 6
Feedback:
I'll play this the second it gets revised.
5) SWING VOTE (1-10): 7
Final Feedback:
This is a good game all around. There is a few dodgey sentances but
those are easily fixed. Good game!
TOTAL SCORE (add items 1 through 5, above): 37