Pros/Cons
+ English is pretty good for second language.
+ Taking damage for other characters.
- Light. Not a lot here.
+/- Very solid idea. But not a very daring mix of films.
Must include an NPC called Keeton
Keeton of Harrington, no less. A priest.
Proximity: How close to the two films is it?
Very Aladdiny and only a bit Raiders.
Complete: Is it complete? Could you run it?
As a one shot - just about. Not sure there is enough intrigue and roleplay opportunity for my players, though.
Attractive: Is it attractive to look at?
Yes! Aldo's drawings are lovely.
Professional: How much effort went into layout and style?
Layout is simple and style is readable but not very emotive. Did mention lovely graphics?
Extras: Did they include actual cover, index, character sheet or any other cool things you get in a proper RPG?
Front cover, character sheet.
Conclude
I think the match is too close to really knock my socks off but it is complete and very well presented.