So I have received Onix's suggestions/corrections.
Great feed back by the way there sir.
I'm working on the corrections now.
After reading the feed back I feel I should add a section on the "Nature of KEETON"
so there is some solid guidelines on how the GM should use "him".
Also . . . how was the format?
I used 1/2 page A4 (8.5x11 here) in landscape so when printed duplex(double sided) it
would make a nice little booklet. Is it worth keeping that format or should I go back to
normal sized sheets?
Pending on RL I'm hoping to get the changes made and the "revised" game submitted
by the end of the week . . .
fingers crossedThanks agian for all the help