Looking for proofreaders

[Agmar]

The long-awaited second edition of Warriors, Wizards & Wanderers is nearly completed!

The system was redone from scratch and now only use d6 and I added some new material like a random dungeon generator, a sample adventure and rules for traps. Now it's truly a complete game in 8 pages

Anyway, since English is not my primary language, if someone can look at the file and point me any error of grammar or syntax, it will be greatly appreciated. Comments are also welcomed.

The file is temporarily located here:

And Merry Christmas everybody!

[Rob Lang]

Are you intending on making the game free? If so, I will proof read as well as review it on if you like!

[Agmar]

Indeed, it's intended to be a free game and you're welcome to review it.

Anyway, the file has been updated with minor rule changes and after some basic proofreading.

Happy new year everybody too

[Rob Lang]

Thanks Agmar, I'll add it to my list of things to review.

[tadk]

Would you still like another set of eyes on your game?

[Chainsaw Aardvark]

I'm a little busy at the moment, but have actual college course in technical editing behind me, and a degree in English. It may take a while, but I'll give it a look over.