I've been working on a new GM Section for The Artifact and one of the things that it struck me to do was to spend a bit more time helping a new GM tackle the job. So from a little more than one page of text, I'm upping my advice to seven pages. I don't have a new player that I can throw this concept at so I can't fully sanity check it. I will be trying to use it myself.
I was wondering if the monkeys could offer any suggestions.
What I'd like to know is, does this make sense?
Are there any gotchas or glaring omissions?
Do you think that understanding what is being described would have helped you be a better GM off the bat?