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Adventurer RPG-My first submission

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Adventurer RPG-My first submission

Postby Technomancer » Mon Oct 30, 2006 6:52 am

Hi everyone. Just wanted to announce my first rpg here. I was inspired and challenged by the One-Page RPG concept, so I decided to try my hand at it.

Adventurer is basic, generic, vanilla fantasy. Nothing terribly innovative, it's probably best used as a tool for an experienced GM to usher newcomers into the hobby.

If anyone cares to check it out and has any comments or criticisms, I'd love to hear them.

Game can be found .
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Postby Chainsaw Aardvark » Mon Oct 30, 2006 2:10 pm

I just looked over your game - its good! I might suggest that you rearrange the organization a little - list what attributes there are before you list the Race & Class Adjustments. You also might be able to squeeze it so that the attributes are in a list rather than part of a "paragraph".

My only other complaint is that you have deprived us of any setting details by keeping it down to one page! I eagerly await to see you post your ideas about the fantasy realm and what creatures reside there.

Thanks for the game - its now a permanent part of my collection.
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Postby jeffmoore » Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:38 am

Joe,

This is really nice. A sweet system. Easy. Well explained. Concise. I really like this a lot! Great work. I can see taking this to the table and playing it! Well done.
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