Romantic Comedy - 24 hour Challenge

[The Storeman]

Hi, I'd like to start by saying that I'm new to the 1km1kt forums, and not a native English speaker, so you'll find mistakes aplenty on my posts haha.

Now, on to the challenge. I've been working on a RPG, but now I'm stuck. So to unwind, I decided to take the challenge and think about something else for a day, while keeping the RPG ideas flowing.

Technically, my time started an hour ago, give or take a few minutes, as this idea came to me while taking the bus home.

My theme will be "Romantic Comedy"; and the characters will be "protagonists-to-be", trying to woo the "Love Interest" of the movie and become the movie's leading character.

Still working on some ideas, but I hope the first draft will be up online in a few hours, so I can (potentially) get some feedback for tomorrow morning. (Where I am is already late afternoon).

Hope the final result is something interesting.

[The Storeman]

Here it is, the first draft of Wacky Love:



What do you think? Would you play it? Is there some big mistake I missed?

Hope you like it. Will keep posting as I work.

[The Storeman]

Second and Last Draft. From now on, working on the Final Version.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/tayu1408j4yf9 ... dDraft.pdf

Had to make a few changes, Honor was overpowered, Slyness had more uses than you could actually use. I feel better about this new version, rules wise. The final update will have some nicer fonts, and some editing to make it read easier.

[The Storeman]

My 24 hours are up, so here is the final Version. It's the plain one because something went bonkers on the one with nice fonts and images. I'll submit it later to 1km1kt, just wanted to leave a link here. Hope you enjoy.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/19hyhkksrcn9a ... lNoImg.pdf

[Rob Lang]

Hey Storeman, great to have you onboard. Sorry I've not replied, I keep my eyes away from 24 Hour RPGs while a competition is on (makes for fairer judging). Dropbox is cool but we love to have the games in our directory so that (one day) we can build a lovely index of them all. Please submit your game with a lovely bit of description here:

http://www.1km1kt.net/submissions

Thank you and well done!