Liquid Crystal

by **Destriarch** » Mon Mar 13, 2006 4:36 am

Well, I'm pleased with the response so far, but I do feel sorry for the poor people who have to review this game. I get the feeling it's going to be a bit of a monster. Does anyone think that including too much detail is going to count against me? I'm up to ten pages already (admittedly that's counting the summary of the ingredients I used and a couple of page breaks) and I get the feeling that it's going to take me right up to the deadline to complete it.

Ash

by **Mark Bravura** » Mon Mar 13, 2006 10:24 pm

Skitz? Manic? The 'Bot should have Guardians quietly ruling over them. The big "OFF" swich [where they stand- domicile- to be "rebooted"]. Other than that, keep on keepin' on!

M.B.

by **Destriarch** » Tue Mar 14, 2006 4:26 pm

by **shehee** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:34 am

Sounds like a game about a right of passage. Maybe the robots are also given a name, instead of a number, in addition to the face. And speaking of the face, I think it should always be liquid crystal. It's a good image, and replacing with metal would de-humanize them even more. I can't see it as a reward. What if it just becomes a more human face, that they get to control themselves, instead of a caricature their not able to control before their visit to the committee?

by **Destriarch** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 2:50 am

by **shehee** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 12:05 pm

by **Destriarch** » Wed Mar 15, 2006 1:10 pm

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