Second Draft: Our Steel, King's Law [was Steel on Steel]

[Joshua BishopRoby]

[MikeSands]

A draft already? Man, I was just feeling proud of finishing an outline...

[Joshua BishopRoby]

See, and I was just remarking to myself, "Wait, it's one in the morning? Where did Saturday go?"

[Troy_Costisick]

[Doug Ruff]

Joshua,

I've just read to the end of your PDF, and you are a very bad man - you know why!

Initial reaction is that it looks great, but would benefit greatly from examples of play. This helps a lot in translating the written rules into what Actual Play would look like, which is a huge bonus for anyone reviewing the game.

Regards,

Doug

[Joshua BishopRoby]

Thanks, Troy and Doug!

Yeah, I realized as I was drifting off to sleep last night that I still didn't have examples of play in there. It's a lack I intend to fix -- perhaps today, perhaps not.

And I have no idea what you're talking about, Doug! (-:O

[jwalton]

It's like Rune + Dogs + Muskateers. Hot.

[Joshua BishopRoby]

[Joshua BishopRoby]

[spaceanddeath]