First Draft: The Dynasty

[Adam Kleizer]

I've completed a first draft of my game.




Some feedback would be really appreciated. Thanks in advance!

[Adam Kleizer]

I'm working on some improvements to the text right now. Most of the rules are now solid and will not be changed except I get better ideas of handling some situations or detect loopholes. Or you people give me some really sweet feedback I need to incorporate.

No, I'm not here to bump my thread, really!

I have some questions:
-Is the text clear? Please tell me if you didn't get past the first couple of sentences. It's my fault and I need to corrigate it if that's the case. I've learned english only for one year and that was already ten years ago, might be that my language confuses some people.
-I feel like it's a bit too brief. Isn't it?
-Which parts need more explanation? I know there are some rules people won't understand at first sight. As a beginner in game design, I am not sure which ones these are.
-Which parts need an example? Might be that every part, please tell me if that's the case.
-Does the example character sheet help in understanding the game?

[Graham Walmsley]

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[Adam Kleizer]

[Adam Kleizer]