Done!

[DavidEBest]

I just submitted my game Chaos Lords and the Desert of Death. I am pretty happy with the way it turned out, but there are some things that I think could have gone better/will need to be improved.

Thanks for all the feedback, and making this a fun challenge.

How are the rest of you doing? Anything you would've done differently?

[koipond]

Write less. I'm at 8k words and still needing about 2k more before I'm done.

[tadk]

gotten a lot more done on it.
I really have no character advancement, lots of career path stuff to complete, more flavor and huge expansion of the city as a character creation section. I mean someone could fluff it and run as is. I could only because it is my game and shows a ton of what I want from a game from now on. Still would have liked to have gotten farther.