2011 - The Good, The Bad, and the Ugly/Dark City

[Gryffudd]

[Groffa]

I really like the layout, it feels professional. I like the idea behind what-is-believed/what-is-true; it feels natural and logical. I haven't seen "Dark City" but while reading the game I got a Matrix-feeling that I liked!

Here's something that confused me:
The game is set primarily in a large city somewhere along the eastern coast of the United States of America
and later: Any large city such as Los Angeles or San Francisco will do.

After reading it through a couple of times I understood what you meant (it's the size), but I have to admit that my mind at first was set on and expecting cities along the eastern coast (since the focus was there)

Another note about east/west:
The news from back east has been late in arriving
and
...it’s still nice to read about what’s been happening in northern, eastern, and southern U.S.
(emphasis mine)

I may have missed something, but it all tells me that I'm actually on the west coast? Or am I only to believe I am on the west coast, so when I awake I'm really on the east?

Other than that: good work!

[Gryffudd]

Arg, typos, the bane of my life. That first bit about a large city on the east coast should indeed say west coast.

Pat

[koipond]

Any time you're interested Gryffudd, I'll do my best to drive you nuts. ^_^

[koipond]

Also, your is up too.

[Gryffudd]

I responded our your site, but probably should thank you here too.

Thanks for taking a look at the game. There are definitely things to think about if/when I continue to work on it in the future.

Pat

[koipond]

No worries. I'm sorry I messed it up and still went with The Good, the Bad and the Ugly rather than a Fistfull of Dollars.

[Gryffudd]

No problem. I should have tried to edit the title.

Pat

[Gryffudd]

Edit: Never mind, found the answer.

Pat