Feedback - Djinnbusters

[Rob Lang]

Pros/Cons
+ Ghost storage mechanic is cool
+ Ghost bestiary is great, esp the weaknesses
- Unattractive layout
- Presentation/writing is a bit jumbled

Must include an NPC called Keeton
Yep, the Sultan, no less!

Proximity: How close to the two films is it?
Pretty good, although it could feel a little more Ghostbustery. Very difficult to do, I think but feels very Aladdin-like.

Complete: Is it complete? Could you run it?
It is complete but quite confused.

Attractive: Is it attractive to look at?
Not really.

Professional: How much effort went into layout and style?
Not much.

Extras: Did they include actual cover, index, character sheet or any other cool things you get in a proper RPG?
Yep, extras are there but are very simple.

Conclude
An interesting take on the genre but not quite professional enough to compete with the others.

[Groffa]

Thanks for the feedback!