the Silent Void

[J.K.Mosher]

Thanks Onix.
How would you like me to get it to you?
RPGLab maybe?

[misterecho]

I will speak to Rob, as he's the Judge-in-chief. I can upload your new version and label it as the reworked non-entry version. I'm sure he'll agree as we really love it when monkeys work on their games post-compo.

[Onix]

[J.K.Mosher]

[misterecho]

you can use the contact submission form, or email me: gordon.mckerrell-at-gmail.com

[Onix]

I got it and read over it. I'll do a deep read, maybe tomorrow and look for proof reading and edits.

[J.K.Mosher]

[J.K.Mosher]

So I have received Onix's suggestions/corrections.
Great feed back by the way there sir.

I'm working on the corrections now.
After reading the feed back I feel I should add a section on the "Nature of KEETON"
so there is some solid guidelines on how the GM should use "him".

Also . . . how was the format?
I used 1/2 page A4 (8.5x11 here) in landscape so when printed duplex(double sided) it
would make a nice little booklet. Is it worth keeping that format or should I go back to
normal sized sheets?

Pending on RL I'm hoping to get the changes made and the "revised" game submitted
by the end of the week . . . fingers crossed

Thanks agian for all the help

[Onix]

I liked the tri-fold idea, would the expanded game fit on one? I wouldn't imagine it would.

[J.K.Mosher]

Hmmmm . . . trifold . . .
If I break the "booklet" up I could attempt to make it work over a couple of ti-folds.
Maybe a Main Game, A GM's one, then a final "Resource One".

An idea worth playing with . . .