The LHC Destroyed the World!

[Edgar]

ten pages in all. Should I be depressed? I'll upload now.

and 57 minutes left

...and submitted.

[Edgar]

...whatever works. At second glance, it looks only half finished, but still I think it is an entertaining read, and it has the RPG system to match the feel of the game, I think.

Please comment!

[Starglim]

It's a fine read! The setting is just as outlandish as I had pictured. You've used imagery to very good effect.

It might have helped to separate each two-column section from the next somehow (say, with a jagged red line).

[Rob Lang]

Congratulations! I can't give any specific comments until the judges have got their heads together but well done for getting through the 24 hours and making something! Other may have completed it too but like a marathon, it doesn't make it any easier.

[Edgar]