Ok OK

[kumakami]

game died but I had a thought, Would like to get the game as close to a Pro level as possible. Besideds the game its self needing both editing and expantion I would need to improve layout.

You can use public domain pics in a for pay book, right? If not I need alot of block print and hand drawn art...AND i SUCK AT NON-SCULPTURE.


help please As I need input here.

[Rob Lang]

You need to be careful about the license attached to the images. Public Domain images might have a caveat that they are for non-commercial use. Avoid Creative Commons images that have 'NC' (Non-commercial) attached to them.

[kumakami]

thank you sir.

I would like content input if your so incline...or have the time (know you are one of those people who do things)

[maledictus]

You can use doodles on your book and make them look great, as long as it fits with the general feeling of the layout.

I found the text a bit claustrophobic. My recomendations are to reduce the space between columns, justify paragraphs and reduce the text size just a point.

That's for the layout, as for the game, some things need a clearer explanation. It took me some time to completely understand the character creation process.