A question of system specific adventure writing.

[shortymonster]

i've been hearing some great stuff about Gumshoe at the moment, but I'm not sold on the system.

As for UnMet in different countries, me and a player of mine have spent a good deal of time defining Portugal and what one could find there.

[shortymonster]

Right. I'm mostly happy with the first bit, and I'm hoping that after this hump the rest should start coming together a bit easier. I just wanted to make sure the intro summed up what I was doing and would act not only as a hook for the prospective players, but also for people reading my blog and these forums. With any luck, it should go live by the end of the end of the week, but I think there's a bit more polish I can put on it.

[shortymonster]

Well, it's finally happened. The first step has been taken, and I'm a bit nervous about it to say the least. The reason this has taken so long is the constant re-write process that I subject myself too. In the end, I settled for something that I'm actually happy with, and I hope you all feel the same.

It's only the introductory text, but getting this done has been a big step, and I'm now on with writing the adventure proper. Big thanks go out to the website hosting this intro, as they get more traffic than my own blog, so hopefully this will get onto quite a few people's radar.

I'm not joking when I say I'm looking for feedback by the way. I know there's not much there, but please, let me know what you think. Right, enough build up, click the link, and check out the intro for what will become my first written adventure, .

[shortymonster]

Wow, that writing is so evocative, it makes me want to buy a watch or something....