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Interesting writing tool

Postby Onix » Thu Mar 20, 2014 1:48 pm

I'm interested in this web tool for writers. I'm especially curious to know how some of my current works hold up.
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Postby Chainsaw Aardvark » Thu Mar 20, 2014 6:12 pm

An interesting idea, but I can't help but feel this is a terribly flawed approach. You need to develop your own voice, not write according to such a simple theory. Varying the complexity of your sentences - as well as length - is what keeps a reader from falling asleep.

Some people prefer the use of passive voice to avoid implicating certain individuals. Or for hiding their involvement or confidence. Other modes have their time and place as well.

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Postby kumakami » Thu Mar 20, 2014 10:23 pm

seem like a good tool to write in an other's way....but yeah what CA said.
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Postby Anastylos » Fri Mar 21, 2014 3:05 pm

Its a nice idea. Of course you dont have to use it, but it can help to make your writing more comfortable. If you are writing roleplaying games its good. Keeping things understandable is important. If you are writing a novel you should find your own (but understandable) style.
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Postby Onix » Sat Mar 22, 2014 8:34 am

I for one am terrible at avoiding a passive voice. I've simplified my sentences quite a lot. Apparently I use a lot of adverbs which is for some reason a no-no.
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Postby madunkieg » Sat Mar 22, 2014 11:25 pm

I'm tempted to submit my essays to Hemingway for review. Academic writing is notorious for using the passive voice. Yes, I know that Hemingway won't fix everything. After having to relearn English, I can honestly say that every little bit helps.
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Postby GSLamb » Tue Mar 25, 2014 11:48 am

I seem to recall similar nonsense with the version of WordPerfect I had in high school. It had a subroutine (shakes walker at the term "app") that would "grade" whatever you had written. Much hay was made of the fact that the works of Hemmingway, ironically, graded at the primary school level.

Much like several other people have stated, I tend to write how I speak.
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Postby Onix » Tue Mar 25, 2014 3:16 pm

60% of my everyday speech is movie quotes. That would be a bizarre but interesting role playing game.*

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