I look forward to seeing that. (Do you think it'll actually be finishable in a night?)
One question for you - do you ever recycle the discard pile? It strikes me that this would make a big difference in the overall tension; it wasn't clear to me which was intended in the design. Similarly, where do you figure players will get things to represent the resources gained from cannibalism - do they take them from the discard (and are they limited thereby?), do they search the deck for them, do they just try to remember?
I really like the "desperation" aspect to the questions of why seek the City. That definitely deserves a bump up in attention in the final edition.
- Eric